First draft responses

We asked a couple of people in our class to give us some audience feedback, the responses we recieved were both good and bad:

• I like the different types of camera angles and shots you have used
• I like the plot
• The music adds to the scene
• The music doesnt fit the genre
• The natural lighting defeats the genre

We also recieved some very useful feedback from Mrs Dobbs, we now have a list of things that we can include and change to make it even better.