Audience feedback (max)

We recieved both positive and negative feedback from our audience. However, i dont see the negative feedback as negative, i see it as constrcutive critisim. I believe that we can now improve our short clip because we cant improve the bits that the audience didnt like.

We received feedback from both males and females. The male said that our idea reminds them of dexter. Dexter starts off with a guy making food, but the process of making food relates to death (metal blender spinning fast blending coffee) this is what we have tried to include in our opening clip. We also have to prioritse our idea.

The females liked our idea becuase they said the storyline is gripping and they want to know whats happening next. We need to have a clear sense of genre, good illusion to lighting - upstairs and basement idea, shadows and fragmenting.